</3 ooo yeahhh I thought our love was true I thought it was pure_ I coulda sworn_ that you loved me so-o-o It was all working out ha I was having a good time But then you went with her- further than you went with me- So get out- Right now- Don't try to explain-hain I know everythang You and her make so much more sense then me and you So get out g-g-g-get out get out right now! Don't want to see your face cuz all it does is make me pace back and fourth between hating you and loving you What is a girl like me to do I guess I mistook our deep conversations and our sweet little exchanges For a little more than love But for you that idea is unheard of So get out- Right now- Don't try to explain-hain I know everythang I shoulda seen this coming I shoulda known she was the one you were loving Can't believe I had stupid faith I can't believe that I was the eighth My broken heart won't stay broken for long I just gotta have you gone_ I need for you to leave So I can breathe So get out- Right now- Don't try to explain-hain I know everythang You and her make so much more sense then me and you So get out g-g-g-get out!!
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So this next one was written two years ago, about this boy named Toddy. It is still unfinished,
because of lack of inspiration.
The Love Vision What do you do when you are broken-hearted_ Do you cry over lost love- Or wish upon a star for Mr. Right Maybe ya just admit defeat and forget the feelings Oh love is just a thing of books What movies and shows are made of And romance just doesn't exist We will never find our white dove Give me a fantasy- Imagination galore- Daydreams that Never end oooo Give me some love_ The sweet talkin dudes__ with their lines so cool and the moves SO smooth Yeah, we all know who they are Sure they'll take your breath away but they also steal hearts So guard yourself darling Don't let a smile seal your fate Take some time to know them Before you lose it all on that first date! Give me a fantasy- Imagination galore- Daydreams that Never end oooo Give me some love_
***Susie
Hey Suze this is actually pretty good. You should try righting poetry. Haha like William. -Rose
ReplyDeleteThanks! I don't really have inspiration tho :P But I do have some writings, that my sis wrote that is good. I may post them soon but eh.
DeleteReally good :)
ReplyDelete~Vara Ignatia
Thank you(:
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