Friday, January 20, 2012

Just Some Expressive Love Songs

So yeah I wrote this, last year about this guy I didn't love a lot, but I liked him a lot. Idk, but here is something strange:
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ooo yeahhh
I thought our love was true
I thought it was pure_
I coulda sworn_ that you loved me so-o-o

It was all working out
ha I was having a good time
But then you went with her-
further than you went with me-

So get out-
   Right now-
Don't try to explain-hain
I know everythang

You and her
make so much more sense
then me and you
So get out
g-g-g-get out
get out right now!

Don't want to see your face
cuz all it does is make me pace
back and fourth between hating you and loving you
What is a girl like me to do

I guess I mistook our deep conversations
and our sweet little exchanges
For a little more than love
But for you that idea is unheard of

So get out-
   Right now-
Don't try to explain-hain
I know everythang

I shoulda seen this coming
I shoulda known she was the one you were loving
Can't believe I had stupid faith
I can't believe that I was the eighth

My broken heart won't stay broken for long
I just gotta have you gone_
I need for you to leave
So I can breathe

So get out-
   Right now-
Don't try to explain-hain
I know everythang

You and her
make so much more sense
then me and you
So get out
g-g-g-get out!! 
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 So this next one was written two years ago, about this boy named Toddy. It is still unfinished,
 because of lack of inspiration.
The Love Vision

What do you do when you are broken-hearted_
Do you cry over lost love-
Or wish upon a star for Mr. Right
Maybe ya just admit defeat and forget the feelings

Oh love is just a thing of books
What movies and shows are made of
And romance just doesn't exist
We will never find our white dove

Give me a fantasy-
Imagination galore-
Daydreams that Never end
oooo Give me some love_

The sweet talkin dudes__
with their lines so cool
and the moves SO smooth
Yeah, we all know who they are

Sure they'll take your breath away
but they also steal hearts

So guard yourself darling
Don't let a smile seal your fate
Take some time to know them
Before you lose it all on that first date!

Give me a fantasy-
Imagination galore-
Daydreams that Never end
oooo Give me some love_

So if you actually read this far, congratulations! Good job! I don't know if it is good or not, but it is what I write :P Tell me what you think in the comments
***Susie

4 comments:

  1. Hey Suze this is actually pretty good. You should try righting poetry. Haha like William. -Rose

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    1. Thanks! I don't really have inspiration tho :P But I do have some writings, that my sis wrote that is good. I may post them soon but eh.

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